shadow

You are the shadow
of what I wrote of you.
My stories
they are plain
but you are the page underneath -
the indented words
and the ink that ran
You make me want to connect the dots
spots of words gone through
turn letters into a picture -
make a thousand from a few.

February ‘08

7 Responses to “shadow”


  1. 3 saranblog March 5, 2008 at 6:17 am

    Nice poetry rebecca. I thought it came from your true heart. I really got stunned on reading this. Wat a thinking !!!! wow It shows that u are loving somebody!!!!!! anyway continue your posting buddy!!!

  2. 4 fivereflections March 12, 2008 at 1:52 pm

    ‘make a thousand of a few’ —- > a perfect image

    thanks for sharing
    david in maine USA

  3. 5 gewinnspiele April 30, 2008 at 9:19 am

    Wow, you really have a way with words! Its not easy writing a poetry. I think you’re very good at it.

  4. 6 Kredit ohne Schufa May 14, 2008 at 8:05 pm

    I lie your this poem very much.Its really nice.

  5. 7 lastminute ferienhaus May 20, 2008 at 11:32 am

    thought it came from your true heart. I really got stunned on reading this site.


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